Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.

There is no denying that politicians and
scientists
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a pivotal role in
shaping
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the shaping
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of
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people's
life
.
Politicans
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Politicians
have
power
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the power
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of issuing laws which have
dramatically
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impact on
population's
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life
,
while
scientist
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scientists
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with their new discoveries can
also
bring tremendous changes in the
world
. In
this
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I will try to explore who are more powerful
scientists
or politicians. First and foremost it is worth
to
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noticing
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as
history
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the history
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of humanity shows
scientists
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scientists'
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inventions have
a
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essential influence on the
world
and
alignment
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the alignment
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of military forces of countries.
For
instance
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since
invention
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the invention
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of nuclear weapon
world
expirienced
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experienced
big changes and it had
effect
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an effect
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on
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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between powerful governments
such
as
Soviet
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Union and
USA
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the USA
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. It is well established with help of
scientists
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scientists'
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discoveries in the field of military so-called cold war went
for
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on for
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a long time.
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scientiests
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scientists
inventions have
also
influnce
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influence
influenced
in the economic field namely
invention
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the invention
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of mobile phones, computers and
internet
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the internet
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.
These invention
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simpified
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simplified
life
of
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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and nowadays daily
life
without
this
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devices becomes impossible.
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hand
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politicans
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politicians
have
power
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the power
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to allow
scientists
work
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. They can decide to what extent
fund
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scientist's
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scientists'
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work. Undoubtedly international relationship between governments depends on
politicans
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politicians
.
Moreover
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politicians
politicans
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politicians
have
obvious
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an obvious
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impact on
human's
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life
due to
they
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their
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able
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to claim laws/ In
conclusion
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it is clear that
politicans
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politicians
and
scientists
have equal influence in the
world
.
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