Although there has been a large increase in the numbers of women who go out to work, women continue to do a disproportionate amount of housework and childcare. What can be done to promote greater equality between men and women within the home

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who go out to work have increased when compared to men these days, but they are still lacking a fair and reasonable division in household chores. Because of that, I think it is worthwhile that there are various measures to take advantage of genders within the home. We may mention the disputable fact that most of

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likely considered to be more suitable

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being a housewife. There are many reasons for that bias. For one thing, females tend to be very gentle and careful; so

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most of the chores are assumed by

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, which is very useful in working. But it may give rise to a number of problems, the most obvious is gender discrimination. It makes

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opportunities in employing an occupation and targeting to be promoted in power positions.

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take the lead in fairly promoting jobs, still looking for some organizations,

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will show the way forward to earning the same wages for equivalent work. The most familiar example of

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is that a number of Vietnamese still believe that their parents usually encourage their

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. The solution to

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problem involves many factors.

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authorities play a necessary role in developing and raising citizens’ knowledge. It is

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true that parents are responsible for getting rid of these biases. They not only have to address the problems constructively and tackle them quickly

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their children.

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should not be embarrassed when somebody talks about it too much, because

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are the only one who knows

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best. Nothing could be more apparent than the evidence that many companies have witnessed plenty of noticeable growth in their possessions when they promote the same men and

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and publish figures on

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rank and average earnings of them. In conclusion, it is

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well-known that there are various ways to promote gender equality within the home, but to my way of thinking, these measures are some of the best methods to encourage equality at home.