Some people think that being born to a poor country is a bad luck while others believe that it only helps fuel one’s aspirations to succeed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modern era, not every country is fully developed few countries are still in poverty and poor status. some individuals believe that
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, other people think that it can be motivation for people to achieve their goals. In
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I will discuss all pros and cons and give my opinion. On the one hand,
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in a poor province is unlucky because the quality of life in these places is not better than in economically strong countries.
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, parents in poor nations may not
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to afford education fees for their children
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a lack of healthcare facilities many patients die because of resources
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as machines or doctors to treat them.
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, poor living conditions
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Limited access
  • Education
  • Healthcare
  • Basic amenities
  • Infrastructure
  • Poverty
  • Unemployment
  • Personal growth
  • Development
  • Cycle of poverty
  • Motivation
  • Challenges
  • Life conditions
  • Resilience
  • Determination
  • Hard work
  • Success
  • Creativity
  • Innovation
  • Solutions
  • Positive impact
  • Community
  • Difficulties
  • Equal opportunities
  • International support
  • Aid
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