Officials in your city have an empty space and are planning to build a zoo for recreational purposes. Some residents think that the place might be used for something more complex like a shopping mall or a movie theater. Write about 150-200 words defending one of the two options provided below. You should say why you support the topic and how it would help the residents around you. What problems are there with the other choice? Option : The town‘s municipality should build something more complex.

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as building a zoo is a waste of good space and possibly put fear in the heart of children who don't like dangerous animals.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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