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Do you think that kids under 14 should be allowed to participate in boxing competitions?

#kids #competitions
This
 is a big controversy in my country, Thailand.
Last
 year we had an accident in a boxing competition one kid died after a boxing competition. because the kid’s brains were severely impacted. We have two groups between allowed and disallowed. some people in the allowed group give the reason is Thailand need to develop boxing sport to be the best one in the world
that is
 why we need to train
kids
 under 14 years old and competitions.
In addition
, some families in the upcountry are still poor and they want to earn money to support their parents and family. Including the cost of education that why their parent gives permission to
kids
 participate in boxing competitions.
On the other hand
, some people in the disallowed groups give the reason
that is
kids
 under 14 years old. The bodies and brains did not full development state. If they have an impact body or brain. May affect the future. In my opinion, I disagree
this
 with. In fact, the most reason why
kids
 need to participate in boxing competitions is money. Government should be helping their parent or supporting the cost of education.
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