Students at schools and the university learn far more from lessons with the teachers than from other source (such as internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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it depends on the situation, in
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to get learning from their
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the older
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who is more confident can get information everywhere. Some students at
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gotten from their
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access to
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other resources
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and television because their parents prohibit them from them. Some parents are afraid that their child uses the
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, opening social media or playing games online.
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the lesson with the
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, in the university, the college
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is more independent than the
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at
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get the learning, whether they get
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or
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. Another example,
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life, there is
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learning, that requires
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student
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to study
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informations
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, some faculty provide some facilities that can be
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to use
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. In conclusion, some
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can get material for their lesson anywhere,
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on their situation, it can be on the
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and their
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own advantages, as far
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intention to study,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pedagogy
  • Motivation
  • Interactive learning
  • Curriculum-based
  • Passive consumption
  • Digital literacy
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-solving
  • Feedback mechanism
  • Misinformation
  • Biases
  • Technological advancements
  • Educational methodologies
  • Guidance
  • Structured learning
  • Reliable sources
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