The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the places visited by different people in Canada.

Overall

, the graph zig-zagged for all the categories. The cinema is the most popular place in the whole graph coming at 70% but not only for citizens of Canada but throughout all the types. We

also

can see that new migrants have the lowest percentage for the cinema at 50%

this

can be caused by the fact they are new to the environment. The next accommodation on the list is the theatre which shows the lowest numbers in the whole diagram , having a peak at 25% for new incomers. Another location is the library where official citizens reach numbers just below 40%.

However

this

time new immigrants had the highest rate at 50 per cent.

Lastly

, the zoos' highest figure was new travellers from other English-speaking countries exactly at 50%. And coming, at

last

was the natives' coming in at around 40%

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