The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the places visited by different people in Canada.

Overall

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, the graph zig-zagged for all the categories. The cinema is the most popular place in the whole graph coming at 70% but not only for citizens of Canada but throughout all the types. We

also

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can see that new migrants have the lowest percentage for the cinema at 50%

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can be caused by the fact they are new to the environment. The next accommodation on the list is the theatre which shows the lowest numbers in the whole diagram , having a peak at 25% for new incomers. Another location is the library where official citizens reach numbers just below 40%.

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this

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time new immigrants had the highest rate at 50 per cent.

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, the zoos' highest figure was new travellers from other English-speaking countries exactly at 50%. And coming, at

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last

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was the natives' coming in at around 40%

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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155 words

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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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