You have a bad experince at a restaurent and write a letter to complain to the manager

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are well. I am writing
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letter regarding my experience in your restaurant 'The Lampery'
last
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week.
First,
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I would like to express my thoughts about your stuff. Unfortunately, we did not feel welcome from the beginning and one of the waitress attitudes was out of order. I asked for a cocktails recommendation and she rudely said I can choose from the menu.
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, she was completely not focused and twice she repeated my order wrong. I hope appreciative actions will take place.
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, once the start showed up it was not garnished and was cold. I would expect chicken soup to be warm, especially during
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appalling weather.
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I asked for a medium steak,
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however
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I got completely rare. I would like to highlight that your restaurant has an amazing location and it is embellished with stunning vivid lights. The interior design is marvellous and it is a shame that your stuff cannot have much
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energy. Sincerely, M
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