The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
proportion
of females and males
working in different faculties of a renowned university in 2021. Overall
, it can be seen that the faculty
of engineering mostly hired male staff while
the highest proportion
of female employees was of the faculty
of education.
Regarding male staff, the highest proportion
was in the engineering faculty
at 85% which was approximately four times higher than the number for the faculty
of education, which was the lowest at 25%. The second highest percentages of males
were 62% in the faculty
of science which was equal to the business faculty
.
In contrast
, while
most staffs of the engineering faculty
were male, females were least employed in this
faculty
at 18% which was only one-eight the number of males
. Interestingly, 72% of the staff of the education faculty
were female, making it the highest. Conversely
, it was the same faculty
that had the lowest proportion
of males
at 25%. The proportions of male and female employees of the faculty
of medicine were slightly different at 50% and 49%, respectively.Submitted by pimchanok.npt on
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