The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
proportion
of females and Use synonyms
males
working in different faculties of a renowned university in 2021. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that the Linking Words
faculty
of engineering mostly hired male staff Use synonyms
while
the highest Linking Words
proportion
of female employees was of the Use synonyms
faculty
of education.
Regarding male staff, the highest Use synonyms
proportion
was in the engineering Use synonyms
faculty
at 85% which was approximately four times higher than the number for the Use synonyms
faculty
of education, which was the lowest at 25%. The second highest percentages of Use synonyms
males
were 62% in the Use synonyms
faculty
of science which was equal to the business Use synonyms
faculty
.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
while
most staffs of the engineering Linking Words
faculty
were male, females were least employed in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
faculty
at 18% which was only one-eight the number of Use synonyms
males
. Interestingly, 72% of the staff of the education Use synonyms
faculty
were female, making it the highest. Use synonyms
Conversely
, it was the same Linking Words
faculty
that had the lowest Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
males
at 25%. The proportions of male and female employees of the Use synonyms
faculty
of medicine were slightly different at 50% and 49%, respectively.Use synonyms
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