Certain individuals believe, that it is better to utilize coal and
gas
when it is not expensive,
however
,
otherFix the agreement mistake
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considerReplace the word
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that we should
use
renewable
energy
sources that come
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natureReplace the word
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. It is better to
use
wind or solar power to reduce
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and
global warming. I believe that reducing the percentage of fossil fuels will help us to prevent climate change.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why mankind
useChange the verb form
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fossil fuels
such
as
gas
and coal. One reason for
that is
that
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this natural product
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are cheap and easy to
use
. For many years now people utilize nonrenewable
energy
because they know how to work with it and they have been doing it for a long time.
Although
they
that coal and
gas
produce a lot of
emissions. The carbon footprint that they leave causes a significant impact on our environment.
On the other hand
, individuals should consider some new changes in
energy
power. Using natural sources that can be renewable will make a good effect on our planet. Since
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wind and sun do not produce any type of outpouring it will make the air we
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much cleaner. People who are leaving in big cities are more exposed to any type of lung disease because they
use
a big amount of fossil fuels,
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can cause severe damage to our health.
In addition
, it not only
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on
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body
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but
also
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the planet itself. Countries
such
as
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Denmark, Sweden and
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have
better immune
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in people and tangible improvements in nature
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since they have
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percentageFix the agreement mistake
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of carbon
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.
In conclusion,
although
coal and
gas
is mostly Change the verb form
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use
nowadays and
easyAdd a missing verb
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to comprehend and not expensive yet,
so Correct word choice
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we should consider some changes in
energy
power. Renewable sources will only make our lives better
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since
itCorrect pronoun usage
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will slow down
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global warming.