The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates information about the three diverse categories of
people
who visited different places. Overall
the highest percentage is related to cinema visited by individuals who were born in Canada
, and the lowest number of tourists belong to the theatre by new immigrants born in other countries
, that unpopular in that category.
To begin
with, the cinema is the most popular location among Canadian inhabitants. The data is 70℅ people
who were born in Canada
and 65℅ related individuals born in English-speaking countries
and 50% of people
who were born in other countries
.
According to
the data, Although
the other popular places were newer libraries and zoos, which include about 50% of people
who immigrate to Canada
, the lowest visited related to people
from all different categories, have less welcome to this
place,20% of people
born in Canada
, almost 20% for immigrate of English speaking countries
to any person people
born in Canada
. In sum, the most significant place that people
greeting to them is the cinema and the second stage belongs to the library and zoo.Submitted by rasoolkhazaei995 on
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