The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
The bar charts compare the destinations of two groups of
students
, namely
graduates
and
postgraduates
in the UK after they leave college in 2008.
Students
who decide to
work
full-time will not be mentioned in either graph.
It is clear that
by far the most popular choice for both groups of
students
is to continue their studies.
By contrast
, only a relatively small number of
students
from them decide to
work
voluntarily after their graduation. Continuing to study is the top option for graduate
students
and
postgraduates
, with numbers of approximately 30.000 and 3.000 respectively. Part-time jobs can be seen as their second choice.
Whereas
the discrepancy between "
Further
study" and "Part-time
work
" is much larger for
graduates
than for
postgraduates
. Only 17.735
graduates
work
part-time, which is slightly over half of the number of
students
who decides to learn
further
.
However
,
this
difference can be negligible for
postgraduates
. Voluntary
Work
is the least attractive destination for
graduates
and
postgraduates
, with 3.500 and 345
students
respectively. And, both groups see a large number of
students
who cannot find a job after leaving university.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, graduates, postgraduates, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • full-time work
  • graduate
  • postgraduate
  • trends
  • part-time work
  • further study
  • gap year
  • traveling
  • unemployment
  • percentages
  • proportion
  • significant differences
  • subsequent activities
  • career progression
  • academic advancement
  • job market
  • vocational training
  • data interpretation
  • employment sector
  • career-oriented steps
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