The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The bar charts compare the destinations of two groups of
students
, namely graduates
and postgraduates
in the UK after they leave college in 2008. Students
who decide to work
full-time will not be mentioned in either graph.
It is clear that
by far the most popular choice for both groups of students
is to continue their studies. By contrast
, only a relatively small number of students
from them decide to work
voluntarily after their graduation.
Continuing to study is the top option for graduate students
and postgraduates
, with numbers of approximately 30.000 and 3.000 respectively. Part-time jobs can be seen as their second choice. Whereas
the discrepancy between "Further
study" and "Part-time work
" is much larger for graduates
than for postgraduates
. Only 17.735 graduates
work
part-time, which is slightly over half of the number of students
who decides to learn further
. However
, this
difference can be negligible for postgraduates
.
Voluntary Work
is the least attractive destination for graduates
and postgraduates
, with 3.500 and 345 students
respectively. And, both groups see a large number of students
who cannot find a job after leaving university.Submitted by xiexue1223 on
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