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An increasing number of people is buying one they need on the internet. What are the advantages and the disadvantages for both individuals and company shopping online

#people #internet #individuals #company
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there is advancement in technology making the
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task
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 of an individual easier.
This
 advancement has
aslo
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also
 boosted public spending on the internet with just
one
 click and has
also
 made a retailer's life smoother, though
this
 aspect has accelerated
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 in many places. On
one
 hand, online shopping has made things peaceful for the consumer as they don't have to go to various places to purchase. Nowadays everything is available under
one
 roof which is the internet.
One
 can get anything from any corner of the world by sitting
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one
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 it has
also
 made
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things straightforward for
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businesses as they can sell their commodities with no physical shop which ultimately saves money putting companies in for profit. It has
also
 helped
alot
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a lot
 of small businesses to grow during Covid.
Although
 it has made things more effortless,
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there has been
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increase
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 in
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 and fraud activities. Not long ago, an individual had become
bankcrupt
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bankrupt
 in
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 minutes in Delhi,
Inida
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India
just by clicking a link on an e-store as the
the
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application was directly linked to his bank account. By
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e-commerce
eCommerce
ecommerce
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 it has made our lives less private as well. To
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, online shopping has made our lives more
accesible
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accessible
 and relaxed but it has
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 own
short comings
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 as well. The developers should invest more in developing a program that can secure the personal information of
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 person.
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