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The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples

#crime #people #parents #skills
Over the few decades, crimes had increased dramatically day by day
due to
 which some people thought that giving education to the
families
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 members about criminality is the best option to control bad things. I believe
along with
 training
others
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factors
 are
also
 equally important, why I would explain into the parents 
their
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 are so many
factors
 that are necessary to control crimes.
Firstly
, the environment is the foremost which influence adult to do wrong things, under
this
 friend plays an important role because more than 8 hours per day they would be with friends, where they
learns
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 all types of things ( bad and good).
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,
Recently
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survey
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shown
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 that
,
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 most of the drugs abused younger have
drug use
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friends from
where
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 they
start
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 to use the drugs.
Secondly
, neighbourhood and siblings are
another
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factors
 for
this
, As they are together since, their birth so they would influence from there.
On the other hand
, at young ages there is no balance in hormones so, so sometimes children took wrong discussion unknown, so, educating the parents is somehow important.
For instance
, nowadays most of both fathers and mothers would busy with their own work because of their busy schedules they are unable to care for their children guided them,
due to
 which kids suffered from mental diseases to overcome these they would took the wrong path, so,skills and training are essential. In conclusion, I am opinions, educating the parts is essential along that other
factors
 like the environment
also
 have a great role to control taking the wrong discussion in young adults.
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