All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.' How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language
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age seems to be Add an article
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crucial
skill because we live in Correct article usage
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globalized
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self identity
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite