All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.' How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language

All around the world, speaking a foreign
language
from
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age seems to be
crucial
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skill because we live in
globalized
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world. I think that it has many disadvantages, and I will explain why. The main obstacle would appear to most schools are unable to teach a foreign
language
when
child
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enters the
first
grade. If it is really necessary to learn a second
language
from the beginning,
parents
need to pay additional tuition
fee
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for their schoolchildren and in some
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extra payment is impossible
to
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some
parents
. A
further
issue is being
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bilingual is mostly
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desire, especially what
language
to learn. In my place,
parents
tend to train their
children
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Chinese for preparation
of
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abroad education because it is our
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country and developing market.
However
, after
few
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years
training
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children
avoid
their
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studying because of their
interest
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.
Finally
, speaking both
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fluently
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children
’s cultural development in some cases. For
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,
children
studying English, are tend to say English words when they are in conversation in
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language
. It can cause
children
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their identity, especially in their teen years when
self identity
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becomes crucial and deeply linked with social circles. I do appreciate that there are some advantages
such
as learning quickly and
gramatically
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grammatically
dramatically
a foreign
language
.
However
,
children
need to learn their native
language
first
and they should choose which
language
or what subject to prefer. In conclusion, I believe that
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a native
language
first
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more
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wiser choice, not just
as
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financial but
also
for personal development and cultural reasons.
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