Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?

It is a controversial issue that everyone ought to contribute a certain amount of money to

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in modern society. From my perspective, giving away can

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provide some personal benefits and I will illustrate why in

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essay. Perhaps the major factor here is that donating to

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also

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teach

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children the importance of giving. When children watch people give away, they will grow up to be generous and follow in their footsteps.

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, donating

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charity

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helps to be a good role model in childhood. A second positive factor is that giving promotes feelings of happiness.

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, some research has shown that helping others can

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self-confidence, self-awareness,

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and self-esteem

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, and

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symptoms of depression.

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, nonprofit communities, founded by

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donations

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from volunteers, reach many people who suffer

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cases

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as natural disasters,

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global

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and other emergencies

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worldwide. It is true that handouts are not a sustainable way to combat the problems associated with extreme poverty

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as poor countries

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on foreign resources. But the fact is that supporting

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seems to reduce suffering and save lives.

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with

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, the position to contribute financially to

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appears to be

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children rearing,

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and kindness

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international

grant

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to countries within a short time.