It is a controversial issue that everyone ought to contribute a certain amount of money to
charity
in modern society. From my perspective, giving away can
also
provide some personal benefits and I will illustrate why in
this
essay. Perhaps the major factor here is that donating to
charity
also
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children the importance of giving. When children watch people give away, they will grow up to be generous and follow in their footsteps.
In addition
, donating
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also
helps to be a good role model in childhood. A second positive factor is that giving promotes feelings of happiness.
For example
, some research has shown that helping others can
be improveChange the verb form
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self-confidence, self-awareness,
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, and
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symptoms of depression.
Finally
, nonprofit communities, founded by
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from volunteers, reach many people who suffer
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cases
such
as natural disasters,
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global
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and other emergencies
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worldwide. It is true that handouts are not a sustainable way to combat the problems associated with extreme poverty
such
as poor countries
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on foreign resources. But the fact is that supporting
charity
seems to reduce suffering and save lives.
To conclude
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, the position to contribute financially to
charity
appears to be
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children rearing,
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and
facilitateWrong verb form
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international
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to countries within a short time.