Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

#friend #birthday #party

Dear Nancy, I would be really appreciated your excellent gift with its fantastic

apperance

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appearance

and functions, so I now

write

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to thank you so much

about

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for

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the greetings that you brought to me at my

birthday's

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birthday

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party. As I saw

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apply

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a glance, it was a well-known MP3 player made

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China. I couldn't

stopping

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listening when

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got it from your hand. There are easy-control buttons and rechargeable

function

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better than a traditional CD player. It is light but full of powerful controls, I can playback and go forward when

a music

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music

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is playing,

also

the music can be played

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half or 70

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of its original running speed. I love it just in the first second that you gave it to me.

After

this

moment, I would invite you to have

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dinner. You may choose a restaurant that you really like

then

we can go

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our dated time. I can't wait for the

meet

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so I just inform you early in

this

mail. Let me know about your confirmation and recommended place. Lovely, Jackson

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

180 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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