The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The given bar chart illustrates information about how average families in a particular country spent their weekly income in two different years 1968 and 2018.
It can be clearly seen that
while
spending for food
, fuel and power, clothing and Correct your spelling
footwear
footware
, and personal Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
declined, the opposite was true for the remaining categories, with only household goods
unchanged. Another noteworthy observation is that spending on food
was by far the most common in 1968, by 2018 leisure occupied the majority of the family budget, followed closely by housing.
In 1968, families spent on average 35% of their weekly income on food
, greatly outweighing other budgetary concerns, each of which represented between 5% and 10%. Among these, fuel and power was
the lowest at
6%.
In 2018, household expenditure for leisure and housing had a significant increase, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
reach
about 22% and 18% respectively, Wrong verb form
reaching
overtaken
Wrong verb form
overtaking
food
expense
. Transport Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
also
showed a notable growth (Correct article usage
an increased
increased
Replace the word
increase
7
%). Fuel and power, clothing and Change preposition
of 7
footware
, Correct your spelling
footwear
personal
Correct word choice
and personal
goods
all declined about
5%. Household Change preposition
by about
goods
was
the only one Change the verb form
were
remained
, at 7%.Correct pronoun usage
that remained
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