The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Good morning
sir
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, sir,
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this
is Sreya Nimmagadda from section B, I would like to present my analysis from my research on the solar
panels
using a diagram that shows the details regarding the structure and working of the machine. Electricity has become an essential element.With the next upcoming season (summer) the demand for it raises steeply. The solar panel is an excellent solution that uses direct sunrays and fulfils the need . The parts of it are a transparent glass( absorbs light), an inlet and an outlet through which substances are in and out respectively . The warmer outcome produces current. The medium used acts as
a
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fuel, making the whole thing work. Either
water
or
air
can be used.
Air
panels
are used frequently as
water
is an inadequate resource. working principle;
Air
consists of oxygen and nitrogen let in, and as the glass absorbs rays,heated
air
generates the current.
water
panels
also
have the same working principles,
furthermore
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they have pipes through which
water
runs. I would like
to conclude
by saying that, solar
panels
should be used more often , preferably, the medium is
air
.
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