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In today's modern life, many
people
 enjoy eating or drinking products which contain high levels of
sugar
such
 as coke, candies, cake,...etc. Especially, the youngster. Overconsuming
sugar
 is unhealthy, it is lead to diabetes and heart disease so I totally agree with the above comments that the government should take responsibility to control it by increasing the price of
sugar
-rich food and drink to partly encourage
people
 to limit their consumption of sweet foods and reduce the country's diabetes and obesity rates. There are plenty of reasons for
this
 issue but two main reasons that the state needs to make sugary products should be more expensive.
Firstly
,
people
's
health
 should be paid attention to because when there is
health
, the quality of life will be improved.
As a result
, consumers will be less likely to consume these sugary items and will gravitate more towards the healthier
such
 as choosing fruits or vegetables for their daily meals.
Secondly
, the biggest source for businesses and the state to increase taxes on foods with high
sugar
 content is to reduce production costs, which saves a lot of money. At the moment, India is home to more than 135 million overweight
people
 and 39 million kids below five years of age are overweight. Over the period of 40 years, children and adults are the topmost victims of
sugar
. So to protect your
health
, you need to eat fewer foods with high
sugar
 content, adjust your diet
accordingly
 and exercise and play sports to improve resistance. To protect your
health
, REDUCING THE CONSUMPTION of high
sugar
 content, adjust your diet
accordingly
 and exercise, and play sports to improve resistance. In conclusion, increasing the price of sweet items on the market today is a must because it brings many
health
 benefits to the citizens
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