Some people think the most important thing for nurses is to have strong medical knowledge, but others believe other qualities for nurses are still important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people think the most important thing for nurses is to have strong medical knowledge, but others believe other qualities for nurses are still important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Fully explain your ideas

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem ?

in some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantagges and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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