The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates four destinations(zoo,library,theatre and
cinemas
) visited by three subgroups of Canadians namely,new migrants born in non - English speaking territories outside Canada,Born in Canada and migrants from English-speaking countries. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that English-speaking migrants and natives enjoyed attending
cinemas
,
theatres
,and zoos where recreational activities are possible.
On the other hand
,people from non-English speaking areas attended libraries most
Besides
,
Cinemas
, were popular among native Canadians accounting for 70% of the total number,being the majority of visitors .
Nevertheless
,
theatres
and zoos attracted more visitors who were non-Canadian English speakers compared to the other two categories , around 30% and 50% respectively. 50% of visitors to cinema comprised individuals from-non English- speaking territories and only 10% of them participated in
theatres
as the least involved destination.
Although
individuals from non -English speaking areas, were lagging behind in attending
cinemas
,
theatres
and zoos ( 50%,10% and just above 30% respectively),they recorded the highest proportion in attending libraries.
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