Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.
The three given maps illustrate a number of changes which took place in Tarnagul, a small
town
which is located near Melbourne, from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that Tarnagul has totally transformed in a number of different ways. The most noticeable is the appearance of packing sheds in 1950 and more attractive places in 2000. Compared to 1900, the
town
area
, which was in the middle of the map, was expanded in the year 1950. The Mandarins farm, which was at the bottom in 1900, was replaced with an
area
for cultivating oranges. On the left side, there was a place called dairy in 1900.
However
, in 1950, it became a space for lemons and grapefruit.
In addition
, on the right side, there were two new places for packing sheds which were next to the new tracks. In 2000, the
town
area
was reduced in size compared to the year 1950.The two areas for oranges were disappear and became unused spaces. The lemons and grapefruit farm was converted into
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wildlife sanctuary. The places of packing were transformed into a local museum and a craft market. There was a new tourist shop which was to the bottom of the main road. There was a new park which was established between the
town
area
and attractions.
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