The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The given diagram illustrates how electricity is manufactured by geothermal energy.
Overall
, there are five steps in the process of producing electricity, beginning with pumping cold water
down the underground and ending up with the turbine
which is powered.
First of all, the cold water
is pumped down the underground and to the injection well. The injection well is the place where the cold water
is heated by hot rocks through the geothermal zone. After that, it is transferred to the production well, where the hot water
is pumped up to the ground.
Following
this
, there are condensers on the ground where the hot water
is steamed through a small tube and it will be led to a machine called a generator turbine
. Next,
inside the generator turbine
, the first machine will spinned around by steam. Finally
, the second machine will be powered by the turbine
and the electricity is produced.Submitted by mandupao on
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