The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two maps illustrate a number of changes in the town of Harborne from 1936 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that Harborne has totally transformed in a number of different ways. In addition
, the most noticeable is the appearance of a new place for residents in 2007.
In the centre of the town, there were a lot of renovations. First of all, the sweet shop and the butchers were demolished and replaced by a big supermarket. Next,
the unused space in 1936, which was in the middle, was transformed into a large shopping centre in 2007. Besides
, the flower shop was destroyed to make way for a travel agent.
The forest, which was to the Northwest of the town, was reduced in size. Moreover
, in the Northeast, the residential area was built on the original site of the river. Go to the Eastsouth side,the golf course and the museum were constructed to replace the farmland and the government offices, respectively. Finally
, the cycle path was converted into a road.Submitted by mandupao on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!