The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countried in the same period.

The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countried in the same period.
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The first bar chart illustrates the growth of the population in England and Wales for three centuries beginning from 1700
whereas
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the second chart delineates the details regarding
births
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and
deaths
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for the same period .Units are given in millions for the first chart and
births
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and
deaths
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are given per 1000. Looking from an
overall
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perspective it is readily apparent that the population rose dramatically over the period
while
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both
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death and
births
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rate declined following the peak in 1800 and
both
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demographics show a similar trend for the given course,but death
rates
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were lower than birth
rates
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at any given period of time. In terms of population, in 1700 it was around 10 million and rose dramatically to a peak of just below 40 million in 1900 before hitting a high of nearly 50 million in the next century. With regards to birth and death
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,followed a more or less similar pattern.
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,
both
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started at a low level in 1700 ( birth - just below 10 and
deaths
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just above 5) plunged to a level of more than 20 per 1000 and above 15 per 1000 in 1800 before being dropped to nearly 10 and above 5 respectively during 1900.In 2000
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figures declined
further
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to reach the lowest
rates
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for 300 years ,comprising nearly 10
births
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and exactly 5
deaths
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words births, deaths, both, rates with synonyms.
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