Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tools. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

A group of people argue that indoor

game

is not detrimental for

children

,

while

others think that it has some negative effect on kids . Tow advantage of playing

video

games

is that

children

can build a career and sharpen their brains.I will discuss both opinions throughout the essay. The major concern with playing computers

game

is that

children

are physically less active.

In other words

, when kids play

video

games

they didn't have any movement.Because of ,that they face so many health problems, which ultimately affect

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proper growth.Another disadvantage would be a distraction from family and society. If

children

spend most of their time

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playing

video

games

,it will reduce their social ability to connect with people.

For example

, many young stars choose gaming as a profession and their parents don't take it positively.

That is

why

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they often leave their home . The main advantage of playing

video

games

is that it leads them to a good career. In

this

era of technology,

children

earn lots of money by streaming their

game

skills on online platforms.Another advantage is that it develops their brain .In a

game

, they have to do a lot of teamwork, and upgrading skills ,which assist them to learn something new.

For instance

, American colleges provide gaming subjects to improve

children

's brains and skills.

As a result

, they witnessed positive outcomes from their pupil. In conclusion,

video

games

have some drawbacks like physical and mental issues.But, I think it has a more positive side than negative.