Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language, because some students don’t have a natural ability for languages. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,
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between nations is much
easiler
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easier
than it was in the
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previous
. People can contact
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foreigners
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by using social media and travelling to other countries ,
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that people in countries will have
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the opportunity
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to talk with people from
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boards
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.
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,
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the news
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news
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language
is significant as
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reason cause some school
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student
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students
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to
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others
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other
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languages.
However
,
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disagree with
this
statement students should have
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to choose
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that they would
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learn.
To begin
with,
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student
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students
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to learn a foreign
language
can make
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learners
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hate
that languages
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. What did you feel when you have to do things that you do not like to do? Do you feel nervous?
That is
how
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those children felt. Lack of
language
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because not every
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need
this
skill.
For example
, if you are
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an artist
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, you use only art skills and
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skills.
However
, If you have to talk with
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a foreigner
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,
language
skill is needed but
this
problem can be
solven
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solved
by using
guide
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a guide
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or translator device.
In addition
,
School
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Schools
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should make
foreign
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the foreign
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language
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languages
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as
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alternative subjects or special
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clubs
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. Teachers have to suggest kids
to
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join a course or a group.
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