Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is always a nice thing to see
people
who carry on their hobbies or passions over the years. Unfortunately, in the last
few years, a minimal number of people
dedicate time
to hobbies. This
essay will argue about this
theme and why this
is happening and the effects which could occur.
Dedicating time
to our passions is the best thing to do to find wellness and spend your time
relaxing by yourself or in a group of people
. Some don't have too much time
to spend, because of their job, their children or daily commissions, to have a hobby for someone is only an additional limit in their days. Indeed, the preferred activity will become only stressful for a so busy person.
I strongly believe that this
occurs because of society's scheme which is culturally shared. Fewer people
manage their time
so well to find a little free. As far as I'm concerned, I think that everyone should have something to engage with, it could be a sport or something less dynamic but to know to have a regular event can help me to understand my limits and make a list of new goals. Sadly, it could be possible that some people
have to go to a psychologist for burnout, stress or even depression problems. If all individuals are not happy about the way that they live they formed an unhappy society that could be less functional even at work for example
.
In conclusion, this
essay contained some reasons why for me nowadays society prefer other things to hobbies and why is crucial that this
does not happening
.Change the verb form
happen
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