The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that
people
came to and left the UK
in 2007. At first glance
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,glance
it is clear that
the main factor influencing this
decision was employment.
Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK
, and this
figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people
, 22%, also
emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the proportion of people
entering the UK
for this
purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth.
Another major factor influencing a move to the UK
was for formal study, with over a quarter of people
immigrating for
this
reason. However
, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this
.
The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively. Although
a significant number of people
(32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this
accounted for only 17% with regards
to immigration.Fix the agreement mistake
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