The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that
people
came to and left the
UK
in 2007. At first
glance
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it is clear that
the main factor influencing
this
decision was employment. Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the
UK
, and
this
figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of
people
, 22%,
also
emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the proportion of
people
entering the
UK
for
this
purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the
UK
was for formal study, with over a quarter of
people
immigrating
for
this
reason.
However
, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for
this
. The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively.
Although
a significant number of
people
(32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated,
this
accounted for only 17% with
regards
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to immigration.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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