The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts indicate the percentage of various causes that contributed to
immigration
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as well as
the emigration of Linking Words
people
in the year 2007 in the U.Use synonyms
K
. The charts are composed of six main factors that lead to annual migration.
At a single glance, employment was the leading cause of total migration. And the least number of Use synonyms
people
emigrated for studies from the U.Use synonyms
K
More than half of the Use synonyms
people
migrated for definite job reasons, resulting in 30% of Use synonyms
immigration
and 29% of emigration. Use synonyms
Also
, 12% of Linking Words
people
came to the Use synonyms
U.
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U.K.
K
looking for a job, Use synonyms
while
22% of Linking Words
people
left the U.Use synonyms
K
.Use synonyms
K
. for a similar reason. The percentage of Use synonyms
people
in the Use synonyms
U.
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U.K.
K
, who immigrated or emigrated to accompany someone, was 15% and 13%, respectively.
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Furthermore
, more than a quarter of individuals moved to the U.Linking Words
K
to pursue formal education, Use synonyms
whereas
, only 4% left the U.Linking Words
K
for educational purposes. Use synonyms
However
, 32% of Linking Words
people
gave other or no reason for leaving the U.Use synonyms
K
. and Use synonyms
this
percentage for reasons lead to 17% of Linking Words
immigration
.
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To sum up
, employment and formal study were the major contributing factors to Linking Words
immigration
into the U.Use synonyms
K
. Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
people
emigrated from the U.Use synonyms
K
. looking for a definite job and to look for an activity.Use synonyms
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