The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea

buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart indicates city dwellers'
coffee
and
tea
buying and drinking habits in specific Australian cities. Information is shown for five cities ; Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
, and Hobart. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that different figures are shown about people's
coffee
and
tea
consuming
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habits. In each city, the largest proportion of residents went to a cafe to drink
coffee
or
tea
in
last
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the last
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four-week except for the dwellers living in
Adelaide
. In Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, over 60% of residents went to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
in
last
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4 weeks,
while
only under 50% of people living in
Adelaide
visited the space for the same purpose.
In addition
, in
Adelaide
, the percentage of dwellers who bought instant
coffee
was almost the same as the rate of them going to a cafe in
last
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the last
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4 weeks. Meanwhile, in all cities, the ratio of people buying fresh
coffee
in
last
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the last
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4 weeks was the lowest, and especially in Brisbane, the figure of residents who bought fresh
coffee
was quite smaller than
other
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in other
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regions in Australia.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, adelaide with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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