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The maps below show the malvern nature school campus in 1999 and development plans for 2029

The maps below show the malvern nature school campus in 1999 and development plans for 2029
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The maps
illustate
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illustrate
 changes that will be made to Malvern Nature Campus between 1999 and 2029. It is noticeable that five main modifications were planned on the school campus. These involved connecting building 1 and 2,
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constructions
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 of
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thirds
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 building,
relacating
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relocating
 the
Sports
 fields and a new road leading to a new car park. Looking
the
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 changes in more
details
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, we can see that in 1999 there were only 2 main
building
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buildings
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sepated
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separated
 by a
foot path
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. These were still present
at
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 2029,
however
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 it is planned that there will be a hallway connecting it.
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, they are planning to construct a third school building which will be located where the
sports
 field was. They are planning to move the
sports
 fields at the bottom east of the campus and almost only a third in
sixe
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size
six
 compared in 1999. The two maps
also
shows
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additional
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 road
at
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the
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south of
the
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building two.
These
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leads
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 to a new car park 2 which will be located between building 3 and
sports
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the sports
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 field.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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