The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar charts illustrate the proportions of people who were born in Australia and outside Australia under three living
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(urban, town and rural
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) in 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, the majority of people were born in cities in both years
while
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the percentage of births in rural
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was higher in 1995 compared to 2010. An initial analysis of the charts denotes that in 1995,
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number of newborns in Australian cities accounted for approximately 50%, and it has increased to around 65% in 2010.
However
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, towns and rural
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reported 20% and 30% birth rates respectively
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but declined in the year 2010 to around 18% for both categories.
On the other hand
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, non-Australian births accounted for 60% in 1995 and climbed to 80% in 2010.
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, the proportion of babies from rural
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was reduced dramatically from 40% to roughly 10%.
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, people who were born in towns outside Australia remained at the same percentage which was around 10%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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