The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares four different kinds of places visited by
Canadians
, English and other nations people who reside in Canada
.
In general , cinemas was the place that most Canadians
and English had
visited . Unnecessary verb
apply
Whereas
, for other nation people it was the library .
To be specific , cinemas was the likely place that most Canadians
and English-speaking people visited in Canada
and they accounted for 70% and 65% . While
for migrants born in other nations , it was only 50% . Whereas
, the library was the site where most citizens from other nations visited more and it constituted 55% .while
other two groups contained only 38% and 40% respectively . By contrast
, visitors to zoos in Canada
reported half for English , 43% for Canadians
and 35% for other nation's citizens in Canada
. However
, the theatre was the spot that had the least number of visitors in all three groups and it made up 10% , 20% and 25% respectively.Submitted by varshajose345 on
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