A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantage Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Vikram, I am writing to let you know about
few
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a few
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things to keep in mind regarding the camping that you would be going
and
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to and
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also
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to be it’s your first time
in
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apply
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this
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summer
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. Let me first explain that you would be having more fun
in
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on
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camping
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a camping
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holiday. As there is
trekking
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a trekking
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spot nearby, where people would usually visit
it
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apply
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to have beautiful sunrise. Since it is
summer
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you can’t afford the view if you miss it. Following
to
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apply
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this
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view there are more
adventures
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adventure
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games organized at the site like rock climbing, paintball shooting and numerous more. As know, it gets dark folks around the site
put-up
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put up
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a
camp fire
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campfire
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and have a number of fun by playing
much
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apply
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music,
dance
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and dance
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along with
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a number of activities like truth or dare and UNO cards.
Apart from
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this
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camping nearby
tiny
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a tiny
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pond would give
nice
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a nice
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outlook
dark
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and dark
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sight over
the
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apply
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night looking into the stars you would be having one of the best nights
as well as
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sleep too. Since there will be a lot of activities, do carry
first
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a first
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aid kit, since there will be no medical facilities available at the place. Be more
cautions
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cautious
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while
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participating in rock climbing,
due to
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your inexperience in rock climbing you might end up having severe knee injury
due to
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the effect might cause permanent knee pain and have medical treatment
through-out
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throughout
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your life span. As you know I am in the state of finishing my doctorate and there is a final thesis
needs
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that needs
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to be submitted to the university,
due to
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which I would not be able to make it up
this
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summer
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.
Otherwise
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, I would’ve been there with you
for
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apply
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camping.
On the
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contrary
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,contrary
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I make sure that we will definitely plan for next
summer
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. Your friend, Chiranth
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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