A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday Describe some possible disadvantage Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Vikram,
I am writing to let you know about
few
things to keep in mind regarding the camping that you would be going Correct article usage
a few
and
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to and
also
to be it’s your first time in
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apply
this
summer
.
Let me first explain that you would be having more fun in
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on
camping
holiday. As there is Correct article usage
a camping
trekking
spot nearby, where people would usually visit Add an article
a trekking
it
to have beautiful sunrise. Since it is Correct pronoun usage
apply
summer
you can’t afford the view if you miss it. Following to
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apply
this
view there are more adventures
games organized at the site like rock climbing, paintball shooting and numerous more. As know, it gets dark folks around the site Change the noun form
adventure
put-up
a Correct your spelling
put up
camp fire
and have a number of fun by playing Correct your spelling
campfire
much
music, Correct quantifier usage
apply
dance
Correct word choice
and dance
along with
a number of activities like truth or dare and UNO cards. Apart from
this
camping nearby tiny
pond would give Correct article usage
a tiny
nice
outlook Correct article usage
a nice
dark
sight over Correct word choice
and dark
the
night looking into the stars you would be having one of the best nights Correct article usage
apply
as well as
sleep too.
Since there will be a lot of activities, do carry first
aid kit, since there will be no medical facilities available at the place. Be more Correct article usage
a first
cautions
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cautious
while
participating in rock climbing, due to
your inexperience in rock climbing you might end up having severe knee injury due to
the effect might cause permanent knee pain and have medical treatment through-out
your life span.
As you know I am in the state of finishing my doctorate and there is a final thesis Correct your spelling
throughout
needs
to be submitted to the university, Correct pronoun usage
that needs
due to
which I would not be able to make it up this
summer
. Otherwise
, I would’ve been there with you for
camping.
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apply
On the
contrary
I make sure that we will definitely plan for next Add a comma
,contrary
summer
.
Your friend,
ChiranthSubmitted by nlchiranth11 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,