A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called ‘ the book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter 1)Describe what this book was about 2) Explain how this book influenced you 3) Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter in regards to bring notice about the book
which impacted my life
in many ways,
so that Remove the comma
apply
this
could be useful in contributing to the article that you are publishing in the magazine to let your subscribers know a
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apply
life
can be influenced just by going through a book
.
Initially
, to take it from the beginning I am financial
advisor so economic and Correct article usage
a financial
financial related
books are Add a hyphen
financial-related
my
top list. Change preposition
on my
Which
lead me to live a Correct pronoun usage
This
life
for money, but fortunately a book
named ‘Live like a Monk’ was suggested by well-wisher
friend as Correct article usage
a well-wisher
birthday
gift. Add an article
a birthday
This
book
was written by Jay Shetty one of the best influencer
in Fix the agreement mistake
influencers
the
social media. It was all about narrating what is a Correct article usage
apply
monk
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monk's
life
, his daily activities and what he needs to give up to attain certain
level of spiritual Add an article
a certain
life
. Apart from
this
other insightful
about the Replace the word
insight
book
is what makes a human happy, the definition of happiness, sadness
, Correct word choice
and sadness
how
he can control the anger and take control over the situation which gives Correct word choice
and how
raise
to ambiguity.
As I already mentioned it made me think broadly about Correct your spelling
rise
the
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apply
life
, the way of living and how to live up to the
satisfaction. Correct article usage
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Also
how we need to justify ourselves to the single life
we hold, rather than just focusing on making money to live and die in rich
way. Change the article
a rich
This
was
completely changed my view towards the living perspective. Unnecessary verb
apply
Similarly
I would Add a comma
,Similarly
except
that your subscribers who believe money is all about Correct your spelling
expect
to live
a happy Change the verb form
living
life
means
Change the verb form
mean
this
book
can change they’re thinking and find a path to live a life
in appropriate
manner.
Hope I find Correct your spelling
inappropriate
this
small story of mine in regards to the book
, could be turn
over Change the verb form
be turned
for
any readers through your article.
Thank you for giving Change preposition
to
this opportunities
to the public.
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this opportunity
these opportunities
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Yours
Your
faithfully,
Andrew MathewsCorrect your spelling
Yours
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