A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called ‘ the book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter 1)Describe what this book was about 2) Explain how this book influenced you 3) Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in regards to bring notice about the
book
which impacted my
life
in many ways
,
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so that
this
could be useful in contributing to the article that you are publishing in the magazine to let your subscribers know
a
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life
can be influenced just by going through a
book
.
Initially
, to take it from the beginning I am
financial
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advisor so economic and
financial related
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books are
my
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top list.
Which
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lead me to live a
life
for money, but fortunately a
book
named ‘Live like a Monk’ was suggested by
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friend as
birthday
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gift.
This
book
was written by Jay Shetty one of the best
influencer
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in
the
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social media. It was all about narrating what is a
monk
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life
, his daily activities and what he needs to give up to attain
certain
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level of spiritual
life
.
Apart from
this
other
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about the
book
is what makes a human happy, the definition of happiness,
sadness
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,
how
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he can control the anger and take control over the situation which gives
raise
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to ambiguity. As I already mentioned it made me think broadly about
the
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life
, the way of living and how to live up to
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satisfaction.
Also
how we need to justify ourselves to the single
life
we hold, rather than just focusing on making money to live and die in
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way.
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completely changed my view towards the living perspective.
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I would
except
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that your subscribers who believe money is all about
to live
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a happy
life
means
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mean
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this
book
can change they’re thinking and find a path to live a
life
in appropriate
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manner. Hope I find
this
small story of mine in regards to the
book
, could
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over
for
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any readers through your article. Thank you for giving
this opportunities
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to the public.
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faithfully, Andrew Mathews
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