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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damages does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In
Recent
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 decades, there is been huge debt going on around the world with regard to
the
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plastic
 disposal and
plastic
usage
 by the people or market. Causing rapid
effects
 on the surrounding nature.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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the causes carried out by
the
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plastic
 and measurements that can be taken by the
government
.
Firstly
, plastics are mainly used in
food
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the food
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 industry for packaging in the form of containers or covers. The
effects
 of consuming
food
 from
this
 package system
has
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lot
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a lot
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 of issues like
chemical
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a chemical
the chemical
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 reaction that takes
place
 when
an a
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 hot item like gravy,
soups
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or soups
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 need to be packed.
These chemical reaction
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This chemical reaction
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 can affect the human digestive system which might cause stomach pain, vomiting and dizziness
due to
 the chemical effect that takes
place
 between the hot item and material.
Also
, other issues like in
usage
 of
plastic
bags
 in
day
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the day
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,
today
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and today
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life style
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lifestyle
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 in buying
the
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grocery items. People use them to carry from the
place
 of purchase to
they’re
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their
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 home and throwing them out irresponsibly can cause street animals
eating
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to eat
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this
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these
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plastic
bags
 in search of
food
. For
an a
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an
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 instance in
the
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a
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 country like
India
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,India
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 we see
lot
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 of
usage
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usages
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plastic
bags
 for
this
 purchasing purpose. Street domestic
animal
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animals
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 like cows which are felt freely over the roads, will
end-up
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end up
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 consuming these
bags
while
 looking after the
food
 to
fills
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 its stomach
accidently
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accidentally
due to
this
 effect it ends up
in
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having some digestive problems and die
for
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of
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the
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human irresponsibility. To overcome these
government
 are trying hard by giving more advertisement and spreading awareness in
the
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school and public places. Even though it is reaching
to
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the folks it is not hitting their mind about the serious
effects
that
is
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are
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 taking
place
 in short which is in progress.
Government
 has to come up with
new
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a new
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 strategy
in
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 reaching
to
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citizens by implying strict rules over throwing
plastic
bags
,
bottles
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and bottles
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 irresponsibly just like they do
it
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for traffic violations. With huge penalty implications and using those to manufacture alternatives to
the
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plastics
usage
 like using
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a spoon
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spoon
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spoons
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,
bags
 made up of wooden, steel bottles and containers for packaging can bring out
this
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these
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 bad
effects
 happening over the environment.
To conclude
,
although
 it would be tough to bring these changes to
the
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society it is not
impossible
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 task to happen.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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 has to use
like
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any of the
suggestion
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suggestions
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 or has to come up with new techniques to abide
the
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by the
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 citizens
for
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proper rules and
regulation
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regulations
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 with regard to
environment
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the environment
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.
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