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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

#people #jobs #robots
Years ago people thought about
robots
 just as futuristic movies .
Nowa days
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, some people think that
robots
 will replace all types of
jobs
.
Although
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robots
 can replace human
jobs
, there are
jobs
 that request human contact that
robots
 won’t be able to substitute.
Robots
 are machines that could be expensive
initially
, but after a
while
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it turns cheaper than paying
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to
two
 human beings.
For instance
,
robots
 just request
a
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maintenance every specific time,and these are
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more
 efficient because they are created to do one specific skill,and
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 do not need to have
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 or benefits like humans.
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For
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this these
 reasons, I think
robots
 will take some labor
human
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jobs
.
Conversely
, there are some
jobs
 that are irreplaceable for
robots
 namely,x medicine, education, and social work. These types of professions require
human
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 touch.
For example
,
personally
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 I would not like to have doctor appointments
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without a
without
physical examination or going to the
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psychologist
psychologists
 and talking with a machine.
Robots
 will not replace these types of human
jobs
 that require physical contact.
To conclude
, there are significant
jobs
 that can be replaced by
robots
 to become efficient and productive.
However
, there are
also
jobs
 that always need human beings.
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