Most Children want to watch the same TV programmes or play the same video games as their friends. Do you think parents should allow their children to do this ?

now a days
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most
of
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the
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children
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are intrested
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intrested
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interested
entrusted
to
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in
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playing video games and watching tv programs.in
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today's
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todays
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busy life
parents
are busy with their
works
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work
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. they
donot
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do not
have enough time to spend with
the
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their
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children
and
internet
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the internet
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also
occupied the
childrens
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children's
time.In my
opinion
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parents
should not encourage to accept these activities.the
fallowing
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essay is going to
discribe
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describe
the reasons behind it.
firstly
, these days
the
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apply
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tv programmes are not related to
children
.they
showing
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too much
of
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voilence
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violence
and
nonscence
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nonscience
nonsense
.and
also
they are using some bad words.
This
will affect the young one's mental health.
children
starts
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to
immitate
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imitate
their favourite character by seeing particular programmes.
for instance
, if in the programme their
favourate
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favourite
person was smoking as the result, they
also
habituate smoking. Because they
donot
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do not
know what is wrong and what is right.
therefore
they ruined their life
by
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this
kind of
habits
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.
secondly
,video games
are
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affect pubescent mental behaviour. psychologists
belives
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that
videogames
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video games
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which contain
voilence
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violence
are
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affect behavioural problems.those
voilent
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violent
games increase the anger levels in
children
.
for example
,
pubg
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public
game
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games
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, which was popular in my country. recently
i
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I
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read one news that 8years old student
kill
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his teacher.
then
got know
by
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from
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his
parents
that he behave
strange
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after he start playing
pubg
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public
game
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games
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.and
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the other
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other hand child
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another hand child
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addicted to playing and neglect their studies. By
consider
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all the above information ,
personally
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i
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I
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believe that
parents
should take more care
on
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of
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children
.and spend time with them.
this
is our job to provide good space and health for them.so
parents
shoould
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should
try to avoid these activities.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • Finally
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  • In general

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