-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays
technologies
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more
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is more
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develop
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than it was in the past. It
seen
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to be considered that it is
a
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best
tools
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for
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the student
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student
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students
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to learn more information and improve their knowledge. I agree with
this
statement and
reasons
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the reasons
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will be explained in the essay.
Firstly
,
search
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the search
a search
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engine
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engines
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can help the learner find unknown data and
it
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apply
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not limit the time. In the
case
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that
student
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students
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have
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an issue
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issue
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issues
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with their homework and they could not ask their teacher because it
not
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in
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during
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office hours. So, they can
use
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a search
the search
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engine
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engines
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to find the answer. From my view as a senior programmer,
sometime
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I found an error in my code and I do not know how to solve it.
Therefore
, I
use
google to find
for
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some solution, it
give
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me
answer
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an answer
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or
sometime
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it
give
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me an idea to fix the problem
which
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apply
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faster
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is faster
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than using books.
Secondly
,
internet
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the internet
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contain
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large
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a large
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amount of
practise
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practice
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,
student
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the student
a student
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can
use
it to improve
thier
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their
skill and it
also
enhance
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enhances
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their knowledge.
However
, It can
be
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use
for
chetting
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chatting
as the case in the famous AI
programing
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programming
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in
this
period which is ChatGPI, some people
use
it for writing
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content and making
thesis
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a thesis
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. Some people
use
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it
have
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wrote
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written
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a
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short story and
sell
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it to book
shop
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.
Moreover
, Some
teenager
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teenagers
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use
ChatGPI
doing
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thier
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their
homework, it might affect their cleverness, they might be failed
exam
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because they
be
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able to
done
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do
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it by
thierself
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their self
herself
because they always
use
AI
for
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to
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find
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the answer
an answer
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answer
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. In conclusion, it can be good or bad for children which
depend
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on
ways
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that they
use
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.
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