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The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.
#information #car #ownership #uk
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This
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 line chart depicts how
much
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many
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cars
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people
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owns
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own
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 in the UK between 1975 to 2005.It
clear
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is clear
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that
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apply
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from the graph
that is
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 the local in 1975
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the propotion
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propotion
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proportion
 of
people
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who dont
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dont
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don't
 have
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car
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a car
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rise
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rose
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 to 45
cars
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,
while
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 either
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people
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person
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owns
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who owns
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 one
car
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the propotion
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propotion
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proportion
 fall to 35
cars
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 in 1985.
according to
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 what is shown between 1995 to 2005
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the propotion
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propotion
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proportion
 of
people
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own
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owning
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 one
car
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dramactily
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dramatic
 to 50
cars
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.
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However
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,However
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 we can see
people
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owns
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own
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 two
car
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 climb to 20
cars
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 in 2005.
To sum up
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 , we could say
that is
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 good when
people
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 in 1975 has
less
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fewer
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 than
cars
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 in 2005 and between 1975 to 2005
people
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has
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have
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lowest
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the lowest
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cars
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number of cars
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, people, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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