You have seen an advertisement of a valudable equipment. Write a letter to your manager and ask to buy that product to be used in your company. Include the following in your letter: - What the equipment is - How it can be useful for the company - Describe the procedure for buying the equipment

Dear Mr Rafe, I am writing
this
letter to appraise you about new
equipment
I stumbled upon recently from an advertisement, and eventually to seek your concurrence towards procuring one for our
company
.
Firstly
,
this
equipment
is called an "Advanced water-jet machine" manufactured by a well-renowned
company
from which we own a few of our machines. It is important to consider that our previous
equipment
is not capable to handle the current demand and got extremely worn down to an extent that it became very difficult to use it at times. As we are well aware of the basic handling procedures on our previous device, it becomes
further
easier to handle
this
one without intense training.
Furthermore
,
this
machine not only reduces the
overall
quality of finished materials but
also
increases the output per week
due to
its easiness to perform complicated tasks.
For instance
, the present tool takes 20 minutes to cut a heavy metal
in contrast
to just 8 minutes with
this
proposed one, thereby saving a lot of effort and man-hours. To proceed
further
, we might have to reach out to the
company
's sales team to request the quotation to understand where we stand from the monetary side.
Subsequently
, we need to have proper vetting with our procurement team as they have a better rapport with the purchasing
company
to enjoy
further
discounts based on our relationship and potential tie-up.
Finally
, I hope
this
letter finds you well and request you to consider
this
proposal to procure
this
equipment
for our wider good. Best Regards, Sam Drake (Lead of Quality Assurance)
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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