The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps depicted the development that was made before and after the construction for the benefit of tourists. By comparing the two maps of the island, there was a visible difference that previously only the beach and sea with some trees existed.
The map shows that before the renovation there was only a beach
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after it has extended with the swimming area. Even after the development the trees and plants haven't been removed. There are many new tourist facilities built Remove the comma
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as accommodations, restaurants, and reception places for travellers.
A pier came into place for the people preferring boating. From the pier, there was a vehicle track which leads to the reception and the restaurant. And, there was a footpath which has been constructed to visit the accommodation areas. The residential areas were situated on both sides of the reception area.
Many amenities have been developed for the comfort of tourists. Despite the facilities, in the northeastern ,area the bare land remained the same.Linking Words
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