The two map below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
The maps indicate the changes that the development of the town of Denham between 1986 and now.
Overall
, the farmlands have been removed and the gardens have been cut down. Especially, the number of houses
has increased.
In detail, one of the farmlands by the river stoke has been demolished and other farmland to the northwest of the map has been removed. Such
areas were replaced by a lot of houses
. Similarly
, the size of gardens has been reduced, which has introduced footpaths and built houses
. Especially, the footpath in the middle of the present map was surrounded by houses
.
Turning to other facilities, two shops have been demolished, while
the post office and the bridge have remained unchanged since 1986. As the size of the gardens has been cut down, the large house has been redeveloped into the
retirement home. The primary school have been expanded.Correct article usage
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