The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The given map illustrates the changes that occurred in Ryemouth village over a given period of time from 1995 to the present. Looking from an
overall
perspective it is readily apparent that more buildings were added to the city and the commercially important fishing area was replaced with houses making it a more tourist-attractive area with a newly formed golf ground. In 1995, there was a fishing port situated at the beach with an adjacent fish market along the main
road
in the south.The main
road
extended across the town towards the northwest.In the northwest corner, there were houses on both sides of the
road
in raws
while
the housing scheme was situated in the middle of that particular
road
on the left.Just opposite the housing scheme, there was a forest park.Farmland was in the upper north corner merging with the forest park. At present, farmland is replaced with a golf stadium and more houses are there adjacent to the previous scheme.The shops along the main
road
on the southern border are being converted into restaurants.
Although
the fish market area is still in use as apartments,the fishing port is demolished totally.At the beginning of the crossroad to the northwest,a cafe is present at the same place with a newly formed car park.
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