You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation.

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Dear Mr Chort, I would like to apply for the position of volunteer which advertised

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magazine

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that I read two days ago.

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spend time with children.

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, there are some kids in

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town who need our help and I would like to handle

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fruits that grow in our garden. My colleagues and I going to go on Saturday

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April 16. Please inform me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Aka Khamro

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

118 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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