You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation.

#advertisement #newspaper #volunteers #work #children #head #organisation

Dear Mr Chort, I would like to apply for the position of volunteer which advertised

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magazine

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that I read two days ago.

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with, I like

this

job because I

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spend time with children.

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, there are some kids in

this

town who need our help and I would like to handle

this

issue. if you would tell me how to help and would be glad.

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, I am a manager in the firm for 7 years.

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fruits that grow in our garden. My colleagues and I going to go on Saturday

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April 16. Please inform me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Aka Khamro

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

118 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

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