You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation.

Dear Mr Chort, I would like to apply for the position of volunteer which advertised
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magazine
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that I read two days ago.
To begin
with, I like
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job because I
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spend time with children.
However
, there are some kids in
this
town who need our help and I would like to handle
this
issue. if you would tell me how to help and would be glad.
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, I am a manager in the firm for 7 years.
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fruits that grow in our garden. My colleagues and I going to go on Saturday
that is
April 16. Please inform me at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Aka Khamro
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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