Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been so much discussion revolving around the issue of whether sugary products

such

as artificial

food

or beverage should be more costly to reduce the consumption levels of sugar. The reasons why I totally disagree with

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statement will be provided in

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essay. First of all, a considerable number of consumers will purchase it, regardless of

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price

. Most buyers are already addicted to unhealthy products that

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tags cannot be barriers to them. Rather, they will just complain about

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cost.

For instance

, my sister, who is a big fan of chocolate, is not able to get out of the charms of

this

treat.

Although

the

price

of it is almost doubled, compared with it in the past. She does not actually care about the cost at all.

Thus

, raising the

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of unhealthy

food

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useful alternative. As I have mentioned before, making harmful

food

more expensive does not bring profits to people.

In contrast

, a lot of buyers just have to waste loads of money.

As a result

, manufacturers and the government have to spread information about

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nutrition of items specifically.

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, the majority of human beings will be aware of

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harmful impacts that are contained in

food

. In fact, it is a more beneficial and obvious way to lessen the rate of sugar in every product.

For example

, my father could quit drinking alcohol after seeing a bunch of advertisements that let people know about

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effects

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various kinds of drinks.

That is

why I don't opine that just raising

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of unbeneficial

food

does not bring several benefits. In conclusion, settling the highest expense of items is not positive as a significant number of people ignore

this

fact. What is more, setting

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results in countless advantages.