Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
There has been so much discussion revolving around the issue of whether sugary products
such
as artificial food
or beverage should be more costly to reduce the consumption levels of sugar. The reasons why I totally disagree with this
statement will be provided in this
essay.
First of all, a considerable number of consumers will purchase it, regardless of increased
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the increased
price
. Most buyers are already addicted to unhealthy products that price
tags cannot be barriers to them. Rather, they will just complain about charged
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For instance
, my sister, who is a big fan of chocolate, is not able to get out of the charms of this
treat. Although
the price
of it is almost doubled, compared with it in the past. She does not actually care about the cost at all. Thus
, raising the price
of unhealthy food
is not an
useful alternative.
As I have mentioned before, making harmful Change the article
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food
more expensive does not bring profits to people. In contrast
, a lot of buyers just have to waste loads of money. As a result
, manufacturers and the government have to spread information about disadvantageous
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, the majority of human beings will be aware of Correct article usage
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food
. In fact, it is a more beneficial and obvious way to lessen the rate of sugar in every product. For example
, my father could quit drinking alcohol after seeing a bunch of advertisements that let people know about risky
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why I don't opine that just raising cost
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the cost
food
does not bring several benefits.
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