You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it

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Dear Mr Mohammed I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to notify you about the problem with my keyboard, and you know that my working scope is making reports so it is a serious problem for me.

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problem happened when one of my colleagues drop some of his drink on my keyboard by mistake since

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it is duplicating the letters

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typing. The IT specialist gave me some options for other keyboards but they are not suitable for my typing style, so I try to work on an alternative but I feel I am so slow at work now. I recommend replacing the keyboard with a new same model because I have a lot of reports that must be done as soon as possible. Sincerely Serag Mounir

Submitted by seragmounir777 on Sat Feb 25 2023

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

134 words

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You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it

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