The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
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The charts illustrate the percentages of
energy
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generated from five particular
resources
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and other recyclable
resources
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in a nation in 1985 and 2003. It is evident that the power contribution of oil occupied the most in both years
while
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recycled
resources
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were allocated the least in 1985,
although
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it raised by a minimal amount in 2003. Regarding oil, it provided marginally over half of the
energy
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in 1985, and its proportion declined by thirteen per cent in 2003,
although
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it was the most reliable
energy
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source of all time.
Similarly
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, nuclear
energy
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accounted for only 8 per cent in 2003, after providing slightly over one-fifth of
energy
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produced across the country in 1985.
On the contrary
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, the
energy
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manufacturings by coal and natural gas were in opposite trend.
Although
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coal supported only 8% of
energy
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in 1985, it increased to 22% in 2003. At the same time,
energy
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generation by natural gas
also
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grew by 10%.
However
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, hydro remained constant at 4 per cent, the same proportion of
energy
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generated by other recycled
resources
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in 2003.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, resources with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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