The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003

The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
The charts illustrate the percentages of
energy
generated from five particular
resources
and other recyclable
resources
in a nation in 1985 and 2003. It is evident that the power contribution of oil occupied the most in both years
while
recycled
resources
were allocated the least in 1985,
although
it raised by a minimal amount in 2003. Regarding oil, it provided marginally over half of the
energy
in 1985, and its proportion declined by thirteen per cent in 2003,
although
it was the most reliable
energy
source of all time.
Similarly
, nuclear
energy
accounted for only 8 per cent in 2003, after providing slightly over one-fifth of
energy
produced across the country in 1985.
On the contrary
, the
energy
manufacturings by coal and natural gas were in opposite trend.
Although
coal supported only 8% of
energy
in 1985, it increased to 22% in 2003. At the same time,
energy
generation by natural gas
also
grew by 10%.
However
, hydro remained constant at 4 per cent, the same proportion of
energy
generated by other recycled
resources
in 2003.
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